高考英语作文经典范例

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一.假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言条，内容包括： 1．外出购物 2．替房东还书

3．Tracy 来电话留言：1）咖啡屋（Bolton Coffee）见面取消

2）此事已告知Susan 3) 尽快回电

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Mrs. Wilson,

I’m going out shopping, and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about I o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told Susan about this change.

Li Hua

二.一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：

1．地点：距白山人口处500米；

2．房间及价格：单人间(共20间)，100元／天；

双人间(共15间)，150元／天； 热水淋浴；

3．餐饮：餐厅(中、西餐)，咖啡厅(茶、咖啡)； 4．游泳池：全天免费开放； 5．欢迎预定。 注意：

1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Welcome to Baishan Mountain Hotel

Mountain. It has 20 afaigle rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves three meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the cafe drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge. All are welcome!

三.假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文. 请你根据下列要点写回信. 要点: 1. 参加中文学习班; 2. 看中文书刊、电视； 3. 学唱中文歌曲； 4. 交中国朋友。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。

June 8, 2008 Dear Peter,

Here are a few suggestions. First, it is important to take a Chinese course, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students. Then, it also helps to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.

Besides, it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you’ll learn and remember Chinese words more easily. You can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.

Try and write me in Chinese next time. Best wishes

Li Hua

四. 假定你是李华，正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注

意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。 注意：1．词数100左右，信的格式已为你写好。 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：牛津——Oxford 费用——fee

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University , I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the nest day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours, Li hua

五. 假定你是李华．希望通过外籍教师Peter找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信．描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：

1．年龄 2．性别

3 ．爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；

2．可以适当增加细节．以使行文连贯；

3．开头语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

I want to have a pen friend, hopefully a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similar to mine. In my mind, she is someone who is interested in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. Besides, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experience in traveling, taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards

Li Hua

六.假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。

赞成迁出： 反对迁出：

1．游客多，交通堵塞 2．郊区环境好

1．建于1906年，中外闻名 2．搬迁易造成动物死亡

注意：1．词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。 2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3．参考词汇： 郊区—suburb June 3 ,2005 Dear Editor ,

Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

七.假设你是李华，加拿大一所学校将于今年暑假组织学生来你校访问。其间，Andy Smith将借住你家。请你代表全家写信给Andy，欢迎他的到来，并告知有关事宜。信的要点如下：

※ 上午：学校活动 ※ 下午：游览市区

※ 晚上：看电视，玩游戏，聊天 注意：1．词数：100左右

2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3，参考词汇：安排—arrange Dear Andy,

I am glad to learn that you are coming to China and will stay at my home.

My parents and I are very pleased to have you with us. Now let me tell you what we have arranged for you. I know the school will organize a lot of things for you to do in the morning, but in the afternoon, I’ll show you around and take you to some places of interest. We’ll mostly stay at home in the evening watching TV, playing games, and meeting people. I’m sure we’ll have a wonderful time and enjoy each other’s company.

I’m looking forward very much to meeting you soon.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。 注意：1．词数：100左右。

2．参考词汇：房租—rent(n .)。 Dear Bob,

I’m so glad to learn that you’re coming in September. I’ve found a place for you. It’s a small flat of 25 square meters, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. The rent is 500 yuan per month. The flat is in a building on Fangcao Street, which is not far from Jianxiu Chinese School. Bus No.11 can take you straight to the school. In fact, it’s only one stop. Do you think you’d like it? If not, I can try and find another place for you. Just let me know.

Yours，Li Hua

九.最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为 40%的同学认为

1、不应收门票

2、公园是公众休闲的地方

3、如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象 1、应收门票，但票价不宜高 2、支付园林工人工资 3、购新花木

注意：

1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：门票：entrance fee Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will

no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

Yours truly, Li Hua

十.假如你是李华。你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。 周末活动（减负前） 周末活动（减负后）

白天：上课、做作业

白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等 晚上：做作业

晚上：看新闻、读书、看报 就寝时间：11:30 就寝时间：11:30 范文： Dear Dick,

How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.

Best wishes, Li Hua

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高考英语书面表达实用技巧

(1)注意篇章结构，合理布局

开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。

要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。 前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容。 (2)确定主题句

主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到―画龙点睛‖的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点：

①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点。 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话。

③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。

在最后的冲刺时间里，不管是什么类型的文章，在具体的写作过程中，我们均可以按如下四大步骤进行强化训练，从而提高写作技巧，解决问题：

步骤一：认真审题立意，确定写作中心。找出根据这个中心能够扩展的材料有哪些，要避免那些与中心内容无关的细节。

以命题作文―The Classmate I Admire Most‖为例，文章的主题是关于记叙我最欣赏的一位同学，因而就不能泛泛谈论这位同学的家庭关系、社会背景等，而要紧紧抓住这位同学身上能够吸引你的地方展开去。

步骤二：围绕中心，列出写作提纲。提纲一定要包含所提供的情景、要点，同时尽量使用自己熟悉的词汇与句型。仍以―The Classmate I Admire Most‖为例，提纲可以这样写： ① Who is the Classmate I admire most? ② My reasons. (Some Examples)

③ What can I learn from the classmate。

步骤三，根据字数要求，扩展成篇。有几个可以遵循的规律，供大家参考：

1、在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式。如倒装句、强调句、省略句、主从复合句、对比句、分词短语、介词短语等。

2、使用不同长度的句子，通过分句和合句，增强句子地连贯性和表现力。

3、改变句子的开头方式，不要一味以主、谓、宾、状的次序，可以把状语置于句首，或用分词等。 4、学会使用关联词。如： ① 递进关系： furthermore；moreover；further；In this way ；still； not only...but also...； not...but...； in addition (to)；etc。

② 转折关系：but；even so；however；though；even though；etc。

③ 归纳总结类：in other words；on the whole; in sum; therefore；hence；in short； to sum up；in conclusion; in summary；etc。

④ 强调关系：in fact; especially；particularly；moreover；naturally; what is more important； in reality； indeed; in particular；etc。

⑤ 对照(不同点)：yet; still; for all of that; notwithstanding; rather; neither ... nor; although; though; but; however; etc。

⑥ 并列关系： and; also; as well as；either...，or...；both...and... etc。 ⑦ 先后次序关系：at this time; first; second; at last; previously; simultaneously; last but not least；to begin with；etc。 ⑧ 结果关系：accordingly; thus; consequently; thereupon; etc。 ⑨ 顺序关系： at the outset，following this; at this time; etc。 ⑩ 重申关系：in other words; that is to say; as I have said; etc。 5、尽量避免重复使用同一单词或词组。

步骤四、利用最后的时间做―机械性‖写作练习，强化记忆。例如：常用的应用文如通知、书信等都有其固定的格式及写作技巧，读懂具体内容，然后把内容套进特定的格式中去，就是一篇条理清楚的书面表达了。比方说：通知要掌握：

①通知的对象、地点、时间及要做的事情； ②要注意的事项；

③写上―Don’t be late‖或―Be on time‖(口头通知前还要写上Boys and girls或Ladies and gentlemen，may I have your attention， please？等一类句子)。 例如：

Class 1 and Class 2 are going to plant trees on Western Hills. We’ll take a bus to go there. Please bring lunch and water with you. Remember to wear old clothes as we’ll do a lot of hard work. We’ll meet in front of the school gate at nine o’clock. Don’t be late。