高考英语满分作文(04山东)

高考英语满分作文(04山东) 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1．词数：100左右：2．参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).　　I'm veryhappy to receive your letter, and I'm glad to hear that you will go to China to learnChinese here. I have already found a fiat for you. It is on FangcaoStreet, which is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. Bus No.11 cantake you there, and it is one stop before the Chinese School. Theflat is on the third floor with 3 rooms, one of which is bedroom,the other two are bathroom and kitchen. There are a bed, a sofa, adesk and some chairs in this 25 square-metres small fiat, and therent is 500 yuan per month. Maybe this fiat is not as good as yourwish, but I’ll try my best to meet your needs. If it is notsuitable enough, write to me and I will look for another betterplace.　　Hope you will come heresoon!　　All the best!　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　LiHua满分理由　　本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。DearBob,　　Welcome to China! You wrote to me to find a placefor you.　　I have found an apartment on Fangcao Street nearJianxin Chinese School. It is on the third floor andthere’re three rooms in it: abedroom, a kitchen, and a bathroom. There is a bed, a sofa, a deskand a chair in the bedroom. The house is 25 square metres and therent is 500 yuan per month.　　Also from this house you can get to your schooleasily. Just take the No.11 bus at the bus-stop in front of thebuilding. It is only one stop. At last, will you please tell me thetime you arrive? Then I'll beable to meet you at the airport, see you.　　Best wishes !　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua满分理由　　本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。DearBob,　　How are you these days?　　I'm so gladto know that you'll come to ourcity to learn Chinese. You asked me to find a place for you. NowI've found one which I think ispretty good. The place is on Fang Cao Street which is near theNo.11 bus stop. It's just onestop away from Jianxin Chinese School.　　There are three rooms,a kitchen, a bathroom anda bedroom. Though it is not very big, only 25 square metres, Ithink it is suitable. By the way, the rent is 500 yuan per month. Ihope you'll like it. If not,I'll try to find another placefor you.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　LiHua满分理由　　本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。作文：DearBob,　　I'm glad tohear from you.　　Welcome to our city in september.I've found a suitable house foryou.　　The house is on Fang Cao Street, not far from theJianxin Chinese School. If you take the No.11 bus, it is just onestop.　　It is a flat on the third floor of a building. Ithas three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom and a kitchen. You cancook yourself. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub are veryconvenient for you. In the living-room, there is a bed, a sofa anda desk with chair. The desk is next to the window. It will be goodfor study. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500yuan a month.　　Will you be satisfied with this flat, or you wantanother one? Just let me know. I'll try my best to helpyou.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Li Hua满分理由　　本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitable house”、“not farfrom’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。